Jack Horne Poet Nonet

Message In a Bottle - Help - Jack

I’m marooned on this desert island
with just one beautiful woman:
sandy beaches, blue sky, sun,
more food than we can eat,
crates of washed-up beer.
Just thought I would 
write this note
and gloat.
Help!!!

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Sara Kendrick March 14, 2011 at 4:20 PM Good one..Enjoyed reading and the chuckle..Your presence at my work was a delight..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown March 8, 2011 at 10:42 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win Jack. Love, Carol

Kash Poet March 8, 2011 at 9:34 AM Humorous write here Jack!Congrats on your win!!--kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 8, 2011 at 12:08 AM hahaha! I loved your entry :) way too cool and witty :) For once, I sure hope that help didn't arrive, lol--Enjoyed this one! Congrats!

Sharon Ruebel March 7, 2011 at 11:29 AM Oh my Jack! This is to funny, congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest with this very fun and witty message. As Always, Shar

Wilma Neels March 7, 2011 at 4:22 AM hehe, congratulations Jack on your win with this witty write :) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2011 at 10:59 PM Yours was fantastic. Congratulations, Jack.

John Freeman March 6, 2011 at 5:54 PM Great to see you in the top ten Jack, beautiful job. Congratulations on your worthy ninth place honor. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick March 6, 2011 at 3:31 PM Congratulations on your ninth place win in the contest, Jack. Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta March 6, 2011 at 2:27 PM Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Linda, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 12:28 PM Congrats Jack on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your support...

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2011 at 10:28 PM oh, and I liked that you said woman. You could have said Women!!

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2011 at 10:28 PM heeheeheee. One of the funniest I have seen. LOVE IT

Dr.Ram Mehta March 5, 2011 at 5:20 PM hahahah. very funny and humor message, who wouldn't be jealous of you, jack

Carolyn Devonshire March 5, 2011 at 4:28 PM It sounds like paradise, Jack, and now you've made me laugh again! I think this is secretly every man's dream. Surely this will be a winner in the contest. "Help" will not be arriving soon, so enjoy the island. LOL Love, Carolyn