Message In a Bottle

Sailing the seven seas
On true love's eternal tide
Expressed on a wave


Thabang Jan Ngoma
22-07-2015

Sponsor: Frank Herrera
Contest Name: LOVE IN A FAR OFF PLACE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 7, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Obviously, you are a master of the form. The conjunction of the prosaic with the glorious is stunning! The suggestion too of the difference between love and its mere expression- one, the "eternal tide", the other, just "a wave". Sincerest thanks. You've shoo'd me back to school.
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