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MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE

Sailing the seven seas
On true love's eternal tide
Expressed on a wave


Thabang Jan Ngoma
22-07-2015

Sponsor: Frank Herrera
Contest Name: LOVE IN A FAR OFF PLACE 

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Date: 9/7/2016 8:09:00 AM
Obviously, you are a master of the form. The conjunction of the prosaic with the glorious is stunning! The suggestion too of the difference between love and its mere expression- one, the "eternal tide", the other, just "a wave". Sincerest thanks. You've shoo'd me back to school.
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