Message In a Bottle

My love for you burns like the sun.
I know that sounds like a silly pun.
But dear i mean it with all my heart,
You're the only one built for this heart.

I sit alone every night in this house,
Remembering the way we talked all about.
Kiss and cuddling through the night,
That's all I need for the rest of my life.

Well dear I hope this message is clear.
I hope this bottle gets to you dear.
Because I want you for the rest of my life,
And I've known that since the day you entered my life.

-eddie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 1, 2011 at 1:00 AM
Nice, are you the Genie? She better open the bottle! My pleasure to read your poem tonight Eddie. Nice meeting you in PS. Dalila
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