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The rustling leaves on
This beautiful spring day
Brought a message from your soul
In the ground where you lay
The warmth of the sun 
Reminds me of your embrace
Dressed in black
Veil of Venetian lace
My love of my life
And no one will know
The emptiness that’s left
My heart with a hole
The birds they miss you
The cats as well
Sleep my darling
While the spring flowers swell

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Date: 3/1/2024 12:37:00 AM
Such a sad poem my friend. Hope you are well
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Kelli White
Date: 3/1/2024 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Mr. Mo, kelli
Date: 2/27/2024 11:37:00 AM
Dear Kelli, your poem is a beautiful tribute filled with heartfelt emotion. The imagery of nature's whispers carrying messages from the soul is deeply moving. Your expressions of love and loss resonate, evoking a sense of longing and remembrance. This beautiful and touching piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Kelli White
Date: 2/27/2024 12:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Daniel. Kelli
Date: 2/27/2024 10:59:00 AM
Oh to lose a loved one *sigh*. Captured in words beautifully. Best Cindyx
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Kelli White
Date: 2/29/2024 7:01:00 PM
Thank you very much CV, kelli
Date: 2/27/2024 10:34:00 AM
Well written and so sad.
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Kelli White
Date: 2/29/2024 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, kelli
Date: 2/27/2024 9:40:00 AM
This one is touching and sad... beautiful poem...
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Kelli White
Date: 2/29/2024 7:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend , kelli

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