Mesmeric Morn

Blazing blob rises with the scenic sun,
rolls radiant up over ocean’s water line,
dimly dark with night’s fading footprint,
sky on hued horizon turns to tapestry
paints pristine chromatic collage,
long leaves’ silhouette frames idyll image,
mesmeric morn brings a new charming day. 


December 20, 2021
Photo used : # 3
Syllable count : 10/12/9/11/8/10/10
Checked on PS Syllable Counter
Contest : Alliterisen 2
Sponsor : Joseph May
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Allison Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 5:27 PM
really love the imagery and alliteration Subimal, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 7:44 PM
Great imagery in your alterations, Subimal, congratulations on your win. Happy New Year my dear friend with lots of hugs and love
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January 2, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your win with your "Mesmeric Morn" write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
May Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 9:04 AM
Wonderful write Subimal, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!
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