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Mermaid Serenade

M idsummer castaway
E nchanted by a spell
R avished by a sea temptress
M aiden with the raven hair
A balone were her eyes 
I dyllic elixir sweet her voice
D ownstream she led the castaway

S eabirds followed the seductress
E astward once the sailor was bewitched
R ocking to the rhythm of the waves
E merging lost at the other end
N eptune’s curse abetting the nymph
A dieu lost star-crossed captive 
D reamworld is your final destination
E ntwined in the arms of your seafaring goddess



AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Merryman Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 6:45 PM
Stunning imagery in your acrostic, Line! Blessings, Kim M
Gauthier Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 10:25 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Much appreciated ~
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