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Mermaid Fantasy

Out on the ocean A lonely fisherman cries He's unable to find true love No matter how hard he tries. So many failures In his life there have been To Neptune he's praying ''Please find me a queen'' Suddenly from the blue sea A voice can be heard ''I'll find your true love'' If you give me your word. You must tell her often Just how much she means To a heart full of romance and forever dreams. I give you my promise He heard the fisherman say Neptune carried the boat onward To meet true love half way. This is the spot Now you must not forget To catch your true love You must cast your net. After heaving and toiling The fisherman watched the net rise Until the sight of his true love Greeted his eyes. A beautiful mermaid Reached out for his hand Her tail disappearing As they touched dry land. His lips met hers Their hearts were aflutter So wrapped up in love No words did they utter They lived happily ever after In a villa by the sea And until the end of forever Will share this romantic fantasy. 30th May 2014 Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 11:42:00 AM

:( hope to hear from This Duet again...Linda

Jadazzle United
Date: 10/15/2014 3:27:00 AM

Darren will be back with us soon Linda - I had to find the passwords for both accounts I've not been able to bear to log on:-( hugs jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 10:27:00 PM

Jadazzle, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3

Jadazzle United
Date: 8/19/2014 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Linda - Darren hasn't been in contact with me now for over a month now I hope and pray he is OK - am so so worried about him:-( Hugs jan xxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/17/2014 9:22:00 PM

Congrats on the win my friend! I so love it when the guy gets the beautiful girl in the end..

Jadazzle United
Date: 8/19/2014 7:37:00 AM

Many thanks Robert I find it hard to comment at the moment Darren hasn't been in contact for over a month and I am so so worried about him:-( Hugs jan xxx

James Horn

Date: 7/8/2014 3:24:00 PM

Costa Concordia in 2006 huh. We have been Holland American and went on Brilliance of the Sea from Spain to Turkey and back. What a great trip. Love all of your poems ach in a different way. If you get a chance, read some of my most recent poems which it appears that you have done away. So anchors away. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/8/2014 4:01:00 PM

Will drop right by James :-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 4:22:00 PM

HUGS JAN.... I'M WITH YOU ON THAT HUH BOAT... I GOT ISSUES KILLING ME INSIDE..... HUUUUUGGGSSS

Jadazzle United
Date: 6/9/2014 5:45:00 PM

Me too Linda - the collaboration will have to stay on hold at the moment I'm not in a good place atm :-( Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 2:16:00 PM

I was wondering why these notifications are all over my e-mails.. Now I know... LOL...hugs

Jadazzle United
Date: 6/9/2014 3:20:00 PM

Hugs back am so in need of them at the moment Linda :-( Jan xxxx

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/2/2014 9:54:00 AM

Beautiful!.. I love a happy ending.. Good luck to you in the contest and thank you for your comment on my poem... Hugs, Arlene

Jadazzle United
Date: 6/2/2014 10:25:00 AM

Thanks Arlene for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2014 7:50:00 PM

this is a lovely happily ever after Mermaid "tale" Pun intended! It's just right for the contest, jan.

Jadazzle United
Date: 6/2/2014 5:31:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by and your continued support to us both Andrea. Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/1/2014 1:49:00 PM

loved every line,love the flow and the rhyme was tight,wonderful write,go get em in the contest Jadazzle

Jadazzle United
Date: 6/1/2014 4:31:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Richard, hugs Jan xxx

J.W. Earnings

Date: 6/1/2014 6:25:00 AM

I love it tremendously. Mermaids are tight creatures (mythology-like awesomeness). Always adored your writng. Pen on , my friend. XOXO -DWB PS: could we do a collab, Jan? Will be pleased to see your response...! Have a good week and I turned 17 yesterday...you can wish me a good week! xD stay cool and post more of your dazzling verse b/c it rings true to me and it's passionate (all readers who set their eyes on your works are prob. amazed). You are a good writer. Write w/ your might this weeeek!

Jadazzle United
Date: 6/1/2014 11:27:00 AM

Belated Happy 17th Birthday greetings David. I will run your idea past Darren and get back to you my friend. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

J.W. Earnings
Date: 6/1/2014 6:27:00 AM

This message is to both of you. I'd like to write a 3-way collab. (you, Darren and me). You down? You both work so well to write so fantastically.

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/31/2014 10:17:00 AM

WOW~ You two should write a book together. REALLY... This was as best as any write as best as a novel that I didn't want to end. GREAT WRITE. The best to you both in the contest.. Sweet story and wonderful imagery:~) Love and Peace, Deborah

Jadazzle United
Date: 6/1/2014 11:23:00 AM

Blushing here guys you are too kind with your comments.Hugs Jan xxxx

J.W. Earnings
Date: 6/1/2014 6:26:00 AM

I couldn't agree more with Deborah!

Jadazzle United
Date: 5/31/2014 6:21:00 PM

Darren is an absolute delight to work with Deborah and this poem is very special to us both. Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2014 8:57:00 AM

I see why you two write well together. I kind of feel, you two have lots in common, charm, wit, and bump into walls... ,<----- lol... kidding about the bump into walls thing... LOL... xox..Linda

Jadazzle United
Date: 5/31/2014 6:19:00 PM

We have so much in common its scary Linda. Darren really is my soul mate - it is down to more than fate that we write together - can't believe I am so lucky to have found him. If I bumped into something I'm sure he would offer to rub it better :-) hugs Jan xxxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2014 8:54:00 AM

When you have time, please scope out this poem..... http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=245571 -----Tell me what you think, I have an Idea like this in mind... Drop by and leave a smile on the poem.... HUGS.... Linda

Jadazzle United
Date: 5/31/2014 6:16:00 PM

I will do it tomorrow and hopefully Darren will be around then but will pass the message on to him too :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2014 8:52:00 AM

Jan-be-Dazzled, LoL. I love it.. This is very charming...... A sweet romantic fantasy by the sea. Great going... Linda

Jadazzle United
Date: 5/31/2014 6:16:00 PM

Linda you picked up on the joining of our names lol. had fun writing this - we always have fun and I hope you will with us too! Hugs Jan xxx i am always dazzled by his charm and wit Linda I think that;s why we write so well together. xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/31/2014 5:48:00 AM

Nice write ending happily ever after, Jadazzle

Jadazzle United
Date: 5/31/2014 5:57:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan xx We have only been collaborating since March and have so much fun together.

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/30/2014 6:49:00 PM

Awwwwww...sweeeeett :) wonderful I love it!!! They can close the contest right now, cuz here is the winner!

Jadazzle United
Date: 5/31/2014 2:14:00 AM

Awww Casarah that is such a lovely comment it means the world to us. Win or lose we write for fun but it's comments like yours that make it all worthwhile. I can't read your 'Gone with the Wind' entry as we are judging blind but I know it will be awesome. I got my first ever no 1 spot with Darren for Sleeping Beauty I haven't stopped smiling since Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/30/2014 3:59:00 PM

A great story...I love the romance....Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2014 4:13:00 PM

Thanks Tim for being the first to comment - really appreciate your kind words as ever. Hugs Jan xxx