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Mermaid

My passions murmured in her screams Haunting the oceans of my dreams Fishing with strawberries and cream Aquatic fantasies swiftly releasing steam As she glides netted in my sinews Lubricated, she flings her exotic, oiled fins I dive eyes blazing, guiding me to her lips I hold my breath into the depths of her hips Synchronising, losing all fear of drowning Dying abreast, I owe her this yawning She whispers to resurface and feel the sun I take a deep gasp, back breaking dawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/16/2015 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful writing on the mysterious mistress of the sea! Enjoyed the imagery
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 1/16/2015 5:57:00 PM
Hi Ty...thanks ma'man...this was the 3rd version I wrote...it was a tricky one...rgds, Thabang
Date: 12/23/2014 7:01:00 PM
Wow! Very beautiful pen! Very sensual and romantic dear friend.A 7 for you! Wish you and your family a ver Merry Christmas! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 12/23/2014 7:12:00 PM
Hi Dorian, thanks for your comment and for your rating. I wish you&yours a Merry Christmas as well...rgds, Thabang
Date: 12/23/2014 6:46:00 PM
ooh so sensual a write i love the imagery:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 12/23/2014 7:10:00 PM
Hi Jan...thank you for your comment...rgds, Thabang