Mermaid

M ystic lady of the sea E nthralling sailors on the waves R oaring waters flowing deep M any sailors for you do crave A doring how you move through stormy seas I n watery depths of mystery D ancing on the waves so free S ea maidens swimming serenely

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 10:31:00 PM

Joseph, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/17/2014 9:59:00 PM

Congrats on your win!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/9/2013 7:51:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 10/8/2013 8:17:00 PM

Joseph, .......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/8/2013 2:20:00 PM

Joseph, congrats on your placement in the acrostic challenge contest! I love this one. Nicely done...Love and blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2013 6:16:00 PM

thank you Rhonda....good to see you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2013 11:25:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda

Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2013 6:17:00 PM

thank you Linda

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/7/2013 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Joseph ;)

Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2013 6:17:00 PM

thank you Wilma

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/6/2013 9:16:00 AM

nicely done...congrats on your win :)

Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2013 6:18:00 PM

thank you Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2013 12:28:00 AM

Nicely done, Joseph and congrats in my contest.

Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2013 6:54:00 AM

thank you for my placement Andrea...

Cindy Lu

Date: 9/26/2013 8:45:00 PM

This is beautiful... If I faved poetry here I would fav. this one. I often wondered if a mermaid would feel like a misfit or be adored..? (Just pondering) anywho, I think that you have written this most excellently Joseph. I look forward to see what is upcoming from you. And btw, thanks for visiting my poetry. It's appreciated. Cindy

Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2013 6:15:00 PM

thank you so much Cindy