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creature take my love
let me sink into your depth
drown me in passion

© Harry J Horsman 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 6/13/2018 9:20:00 PM
Ohh Harry, your sensuous senryu is steeped in the most delicious passion and intoxicating imagery. I love it and a fav! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/28/2018 6:55:00 AM
(: awesome poem...mermaids are rather interesting creatures in mythology. They could be real j\k -JWE
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Date: 5/22/2018 12:30:00 PM
Beautiful imagination.
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Date: 5/16/2018 11:02:00 AM
A beautiful senryu soaked in romantic flavor, Harry! Very enjoyable. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/14/2018 2:44:00 PM
- A beautiful and sensual poem, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/12/2018 7:51:00 AM
Harry, this is an amazingly beautiful, romantic senryu and one that I wish I could have penned! It reflects your mastery of this poetry form! The masters would appalud you! Definately a fave for me! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/10/2018 9:01:00 AM
This is perfectly written. Well expressed. Powerful :)
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Date: 5/9/2018 5:53:00 AM
Excellent. Very beautifully said. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/8/2018 7:52:00 PM
ohh, you definitely succumbed to a sea-nymph's charm!... beautiful senryu, harry.. huggs
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Date: 5/8/2018 8:43:00 AM
A very romantic drowning my friend lol...great read and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/8/2018 6:43:00 AM
Lovely poem about a creature, your heart holds tell tale signs of your affection, your poetry does the same, Nice one Harry, have a great day
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Date: 5/8/2018 6:08:00 AM
But then you would have to become a Merman wouldn't you? Just kidding. A sensual Senryu Harry....Maria :)
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:53:00 PM
Lovely and sensuous, Harry. Beautiful imagery. Well penned.
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:02:00 PM
Drown me in passion is all I can say... :) great imagery great senryu..
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Date: 5/7/2018 8:39:00 PM
Hot stuff Harry! Fabulous ink :)
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Date: 5/7/2018 6:52:00 PM
Passionate depiction Harry! Strong emotions!
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:42:00 PM
Wow Harry, put that in a bottle with a note to meet you at buoy five near the light tower. You may have to pick-n-choose. Excellent poetry!
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:35:00 PM
ahhhh, yes!!! (have you seen the new series called Siren. It's about THIS!!)
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:18:00 PM
Dynamically passionate and romantic dear, Harry!
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:02:00 PM
Very beautiful Harry:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/7/2018 4:58:00 PM
Great senryu Harry, the mythical mermaid or they.
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