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Mermaid

creature take my love
let me sink into your depth
drown me in passion

© Harry J Horsman 2018

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2018

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June 13, 2018 at 9:20 PM

Ohh Harry, your sensuous senryu is steeped in the most delicious passion and intoxicating imagery. I love it and a fav! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

David William Breidenthal

May 28, 2018 at 6:55 AM

(: awesome poem...mermaids are rather interesting creatures in mythology. They could be real j\k -JWE

May 22, 2018 at 12:30 PM

Beautiful imagination.

May 16, 2018 at 11:02 AM

A beautiful senryu soaked in romantic flavor, Harry! Very enjoyable. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 14, 2018 at 2:44 PM

- A beautiful and sensual poem, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

May 12, 2018 at 7:51 AM

Harry, this is an amazingly beautiful, romantic senryu and one that I wish I could have penned! It reflects your mastery of this poetry form! The masters would appalud you! Definately a fave for me! Hugs. Pandita

May 10, 2018 at 9:01 AM

This is perfectly written. Well expressed. Powerful :)

Ravi Sathasivam

May 9, 2018 at 5:53 AM

Excellent. Very beautifully said. Thanks for sharing it.

May 8, 2018 at 7:52 PM

ohh, you definitely succumbed to a sea-nymph's charm!... beautiful senryu, harry.. huggs

May 8, 2018 at 8:43 AM

A very romantic drowning my friend lol...great read harry...love and light...^WW^

Mystic Rose Rose

May 8, 2018 at 6:43 AM

Lovely poem about a creature, your heart holds tell tale signs of your affection, your poetry does the same, Nice one Harry, have a great day

May 8, 2018 at 6:08 AM

But then you would have to become a Merman wouldn't you? Just kidding. A sensual Senryu Harry....Maria :)

May 7, 2018 at 9:53 PM

Lovely and sensuous, Harry. Beautiful imagery. Well penned.

May 7, 2018 at 9:02 PM

Drown me in passion is all I can say... :) great imagery great senryu..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 7, 2018 at 8:39 PM

Hot stuff Harry! Fabulous ink :)

May 7, 2018 at 6:52 PM

Passionate depiction Harry! Strong emotions!

Charles Messina

May 7, 2018 at 5:42 PM

Wow Harry, put that in a bottle with a note to meet you at buoy five near the light tower. You may have to pick-n-choose. Excellent poetry!

Andrea Dietrich

May 7, 2018 at 5:35 PM

ahhhh, yes!!! (have you seen the new series called Siren. It's about THIS!!)

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 7, 2018 at 5:18 PM

Dynamically passionate and romantic dear, Harry!

May 7, 2018 at 5:02 PM

Very beautiful Harry:-) hugs jan xx

May 7, 2018 at 4:58 PM

Great senryu Harry, the mythical mermaid or they.

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