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Mercury

The great force
That may raise me to a saintly cloud.
I walk an air of calm delivery,
Above the torrent and hollow reproach
To the gaping breath and bliss, I say!
Send each thought into the winds, dipped in mercury.
For truly, there is none more beautiful than the open sky,
When it is seen through the view of the solitary eye.

Copyright © Aiden Asoll | Year Posted 2013

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Karen Anglesey Date: 8/24/2013 12:52:00 PM Gallant and euphoric ... I don't think I've used those words to describe poetry before...but they certainly apply to this lovely 'floating on air' poem :) Login to Reply

Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/23/2013 6:48:00 AM "I walk an air of calm delivery"- another awesome line that I wish I had penned myself. You said to me you wish you could match my ability to be brief and impactful; well, I believe you absolutely have the skill to do the same; you have demonstrated it here. I look forward to reading more of your work; please, post more! :) Login to Reply Aiden Asoll Date: 8/23/2013 10:15:00 AM Thanks!! You give brilliant feedback really glad you like my poetry.

Kim Van Breda Date: 8/22/2013 8:22:00 AM Wonderful piece of descriptive poetry. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/21/2013 6:47:00 PM nothing quite beautiful like nature and it's many visuals we seek and stumble upon, a lovely write, LUV S.K.A.T. Login to Reply Aiden Asoll Date: 8/22/2013 4:01:00 AM hey SKAT, cheers, this was something I once just wrote looking out the window in a science lesson, so its fairly old. Found it again the other day but thought i'd upload it, for me encapsulates everything I live for, so I'm glad other people can also find similar joy in nature, thankyou

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/21/2013 5:39:00 PM Hello Aiden it was nice hearing from you... this one happens to be a nice rising of you. you kind of gave it an inadvisable feel... Always~ Linda Login to Reply Aiden Asoll Date: 8/22/2013 4:16:00 AM Hey thanks, really glad you're enjoying my poetry, SKAT aswell, always feel a bit unsure about what I write till someone comments, so thankyou. Yeah, this one feels slightly different to others when I read it again the other day, not exactly sure why. It's short, but conveys a point very close to my heart, glad you like it.