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Mercurial Beauty

Ethereal, the earth no longer beneath my feet Words immaterial, I will try nonetheless Otherworldly hues imperial to our accustomed views Nightly masterpieces our asterial neighbor creates Unique beauty in our mercurial clouds 11/05/2021 Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by charles messina

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Steve Crismond

Date: 5/5/2022 5:26:00 PM

you are a gifted poet. I love reading your wonderful musing.

Steve Crismond

Date: 5/5/2022 5:24:00 PM

Hello Heather, this is your dad. your poems are extremely insightful. Am I a Great-Grandfather?

Heather Crismond
Date: 5/9/2022 10:26:00 PM

No not yet but your Granddaughter is one year from graduating with an Astrophysics degree and has a very good chance at Princeton for graduate school. She is heading to Australia with a research group and has discovered an exoplanet.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/11/2021 3:37:00 PM

Beautifully described, Heather. Wonderful imagery...Very nicely written. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie

Heather Crismond
Date: 11/13/2021 9:57:00 PM

Thank you so much! I enjoyed your poetry contest and always love learning new styles :)