Heather Crismond Poet Rhyme

Mercurial Beauty

Ethereal, the earth no longer beneath my feet
Words immaterial, I will try nonetheless
Otherworldly hues imperial to our accustomed views
Nightly masterpieces our asterial neighbor creates
Unique beauty in our mercurial clouds

11/05/2021
Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by charles messina

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Steve Crismond May 5, 2022 at 5:26 PM you are a gifted poet. I love reading your wonderful musing.

Steve Crismond May 5, 2022 at 5:24 PM Hello Heather, this is your dad. your poems are extremely insightful. Am I a Great-Grandfather? Heather Crismond May 9, 2022 at 10:26 PM No not yet but your Granddaughter is one year from graduating with an Astrophysics degree and has a very good chance at Princeton for graduate school. She is heading to Australia with a research group and has discovered an exoplanet.

Charles Messina November 11, 2021 at 3:37 PM Beautifully described, Heather. Wonderful imagery...Very nicely written. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie Heather Crismond November 13, 2021 at 9:57 PM Thank you so much! I enjoyed your poetry contest and always love learning new styles :)