Merciful Sea

deep beauty and dangerous boss \ \ \seesaw-rocks my raft 8/14/2020 ziket - not for contest 8/5 syllables

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/15/2020 7:08:00 PM

I like how this boat is visually rocked.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 4:53:00 AM

Thank you, Caren!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/15/2020 6:46:00 AM

KIM MY FRIEND, YOU ARE VERSATILE IN SO MANY DIFFERENT FORMS OF POETRY, THESES FEW WORDS ARE SO MEANINGFUL - BLESS YOU ALWAYS, jENNIFER.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2020 7:24:00 AM

I so appreciate that! Blessings +

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/14/2020 11:11:00 AM

A wonderful write. Bless you sweet lady :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2020 11:15:00 AM

Thank you, Regina!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/14/2020 8:51:00 AM

Stunning, my friend, Kim! Hugs xxx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2020 9:10:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios! This is a satisfying form! Funny how differently the brief forms move us to write: haiku, tanka, monoku, haibun, and more.