Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Merciful Sea

deep beauty and dangerous boss \
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                                                    \seesaw-rocks my raft

 
8/14/2020
ziket - not for contest
8/5 syllables

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Caren Krutsinger August 15, 2020 at 7:08 PM I like how this boat is visually rocked. Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2020 at 4:53 AM Thank you, Caren!

Jennifer Proxenos August 15, 2020 at 6:46 AM KIM MY FRIEND, YOU ARE VERSATILE IN SO MANY DIFFERENT FORMS OF POETRY, THESES FEW WORDS ARE SO MEANINGFUL - BLESS YOU ALWAYS, jENNIFER. Kim Rodrigues August 15, 2020 at 7:24 AM I so appreciate that! Blessings +

Regina Mcintosh August 14, 2020 at 11:11 AM A wonderful write. Bless you sweet lady :) Kim Rodrigues August 14, 2020 at 11:15 AM Thank you, Regina!

Demetrios Trifiatis August 14, 2020 at 8:51 AM Stunning, my friend, Kim! Hugs xxx Kim Rodrigues August 14, 2020 at 9:10 AM Thank you, Demetrios! This is a satisfying form! Funny how differently the brief forms move us to write: haiku, tanka, monoku, haibun, and more.