Savoy Boddie Poet I do not know?

Mental Mess

Power in the mind
The thoughts are tied
Negative over turns positive
And my heart's beat; radioactive

Cursed by the mind's repeat
Gives the realist defeat
Weak in this one heart
My blood flow does not know where to start

So cold and dark,
May the skin's color change like bark
Hear the thought of death
Be best within rest

It never ends
Because my mind's in this trend
As I try to pretend
That your actions don't offend

But then I begin
To watch your heart grow thin
After caring for me then
And now I'm crushed from within

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Ana Espinola Collins May 8, 2014 at 7:41 PM Real deep and well written Savoy... I enjoyed the read :)Ana

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen May 8, 2014 at 11:24 AM Good lines.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 6, 2014 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Savoy

Skat A April 16, 2014 at 5:31 PM wow, love it Savoy, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2014 at 4:29 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Savoy :) - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A April 14, 2014 at 8:38 PM Savoy, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@