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Mental Mess

Power in the mind The thoughts are tied Negative over turns positive And my heart's beat; radioactive Cursed by the mind's repeat Gives the realist defeat Weak in this one heart My blood flow does not know where to start So cold and dark, May the skin's color change like bark Hear the thought of death Be best within rest It never ends Because my mind's in this trend As I try to pretend That your actions don't offend But then I begin To watch your heart grow thin After caring for me then And now I'm crushed from within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/8/2014 7:41:00 PM
Real deep and well written Savoy... I enjoyed the read :)Ana
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Date: 5/8/2014 11:24:00 AM
Good lines.
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Savoy
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Date: 4/16/2014 5:31:00 PM
wow, love it Savoy, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/15/2014 4:29:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Savoy :) - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/14/2014 8:38:00 PM
Savoy, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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