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Mental Enough

Mentally endowed enough, to take the piffle from your puff, and ram it home, sweet butter cup, side effects are frightening, miscarriage of justice, can put you off and pride slips cos you're the Toff that damaged goods, while cancer scoffs. Not so enlightening. thick as your arm is mental charm, which may be so inviting, don't even want to cause alarm. yet love is still exciting 4-jul-11 Don Johnson Brian Strand Contest Name A POEM FROM THEE form or free max 14 lines

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Date: 7/4/2011 1:42:00 PM
I don't understand half the words but like the rhythm and rhyme of your poem. Mike
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:24:00 PM
Love it Don, clever verse
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:43:00 PM
I need an Aussie dictionary, I'm afraid this went right over my head Don
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Date: 7/3/2011 6:34:00 PM
Read this one five times. Hats off to you with this cool and smokey write!
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Date: 7/3/2011 5:44:00 PM
Interesting work that I am reading this eve..I am glad that I chose this one as one of the one that I can read this eve..Sara
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