Mental Castration

I never told you
I wanted you forever...
someone else had balls!


For "Relationship Breakups" contest sponsored by Russell Sivey.
By: George Aul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 4:10 PM
how could I pass on a title with such a vas deferens ...I mean, Vastly Different title!!!! HA!
Wesley Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Couldn't resist the title and I wasn't disappointed. Short message George with massive content!
Wesley Avatar
October 14, 2011 at 5:12 PM
An eye opener in so few words. Strong message!
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your win George. Sorry to be late on comment. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 1:58 AM
oh and big Congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 1:57 AM
VERY nice, George. I knew a guy who kind of said almost those same words to me when he lost me to my hubbie. Makes me wonder sometimes, what if.
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October 9, 2011 at 12:46 AM
GEORGE , CONGRATULATIONS ;-) ~ IN Russell Sivey, CONTEST.. GREAT ENTRY,..ALWAYS,..P.D.
Ramage Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 11:41 PM
Congrats on your win. Lee
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!---Lori
Neels Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 2:24 PM
hehe, somehow this one made me laugh George.. Congratulations on your win.. I really enjoyed your approach and your title ;) love W
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