Mental Block

I.

control plus a,
delete - 
ink on the keyboard.

II.

nothing to write;
i press
too harddddd.

III.

a cursor
betwen a window and space -
mental block.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 16, 2016 at 4:31 PM
Arch, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **
Shahwan Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 6:36 AM
Great American Haiku.
Smith Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 2:26 PM
TRUTH!!!
Poddar Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 7:49 PM
What a relevant series! And true to its form!
Hudson Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 7:05 PM
I have more of these than I care to admit. Oh did I just say that out loud!-AA:))
Guzzi Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 1:17 PM
ok my friend haiku lesson #1 it has to be about NATURE, it is a form of Japanese poetry, consisting of 17 moras (or on), in three metrical phrases of 5, 7, and 5 moras respectively[1]. Haiku typically contain a kigo, or seasonal reference, and a kireji or verbal caesura. A haiku in English usually appears in three lines. The above work is still a good effort but not a haiku ;) Light & Love
Higgins Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Very creative piece on being mentally block to write..good work.
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