Men's Lies

Men
make
promises
they tend
not to keep
and
Naiive
girls
smile
bearing forth
their
fragile
hearts
waiting for
their
time to come
when they will fall in love
and
MEN
will
admire
your
beauty
present you
with
compliments.
Such
Surface
trivialities
Words
are
after said and done
Meaningless
And
actions
without the
Most
modest
Intentions
Are still lies.
and
With
Kisses
so
empty
I
choke
on
the
absense
of
truths.

I am
done
with
mens
Lies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 11/26/2008 8:07:00 PM
Well, I am very glad that I do not lie! "Hello Precious Laura Hew!"~I am sorry that it seemed to take so long to get back to you dear lady~Its only been a weel, yet it seems as though it has been a month? I like your writing style dear~Somewhat unique it seems! And, it flows well, straight from your heart & soul I believe~And, it was so nice to hear from you dear~For I have noticed you before! On we go...."Love, John!"~
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