Katherine Stella Poet Senryu

Menacing Moms

<                                     just look at my son ...
                                 down to size of thirty two
                                 ....    fencing hackling




                                      meat and potatoes ...
                                   leftovers from my mother
                                 ...  well isn't that special



                                     eat sleep and ... running
                                     thats all I will ever see
                                   ...  glad father isn't here




Written by Katherine Stella
For Dr Rams IN-LAWS Contest
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Caryl Muzzey June 26, 2011 at 11:49 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Katherine with this wonderful triplet Senryu, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

John Freeman June 8, 2011 at 8:17 PM Katherine, good to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2011 at 10:19 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Katherine. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2011 at 9:01 PM Congratulations on your win, Katherine!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 6, 2011 at 3:53 PM congrats Katherine on an exciting win in Dr. Ram's in laws contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy another delightful sweet success..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 3:20 PM Congratulations on the eighth place win in my contest, Katherine

Dinda Minardi June 5, 2011 at 6:48 AM wow! this is great! :)

Poet Tacito June 5, 2011 at 6:33 AM This was awesome. Straight up nice job. Last haiku hit hard.

Gwendolen Song June 5, 2011 at 5:53 AM Hi Katherine- Clever senryu for Dr. Ram's contest. Do I sense sarcasm in this write? lol. Cute. Gwendolen