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Written: August 13, 2023 No 1236 New Poem Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
______________________________________________________________ wish we could embrace saying this yet crossing time barrier is still beyond me sending my words as whispers in the wind look back master art of self-love you deserve it beyond anyone else mistakes are typical for your age watch, learn & proceed Realize parents commit sins as well yet no harm chastise since they care fear arises world is hellish place you still too naïve & trustworthy. Express your uneasiness with words you have valid opinions but stop... overthinking? too much analysis no one is judging your words or actions. Old age isn't your goal cherish simple life winter dance in the snow camp under the skies

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Date: 8/13/2023 12:55:00 PM
A lovely poem, Sotto! Congrats on your song out of "Earthiness". (really happy for you) This is beautiful and inspirational.
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Date: 8/13/2023 11:37:00 AM
Good work. Sure winner,
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