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Memories Part One

The gloomy miserable day the atmosphere dark and gray, The clouds looming overhead looking at your lonely deathbed, Hoping to see your chest fall and rise or to see you sit up and say it's all lies, Praying to see your eyes open once more but when they didn't my heart tore, Not wanting to take my eyes off you just in case my hopes came true, my legs started to feel weak as I kissed you on your cold cheek, Feeling the raindrops slide down my face seeing them splash on your smooth case, As you were lowered into the unforgiving ground all the memories around took me to the ground ZOEY CHARRAIN ALOISI

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 3/10/2016 12:49:00 PM
Zoe, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:32:00 PM
ZOE, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2012 3:24:00 PM
Today as I remember my late Mother, I find this hits at the heart strings, well done Zoey
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