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Memories On Paper

Oh cluttered memories in my head, thrust into the spin of thread disperse from the rigid spool to give me the writing tool. Altered words on the page, far be it joy, or all from rage I jot it down, oh so fast that of my pen, a shadow cast. Elegant, not in all regards but shattered fractals and pencil shards Nevermind, to it I return a blissful moment, I so earned. Jessica Thompson-5/19/14

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Date: 7/7/2022 2:42:00 AM
Nice! you allow the reader to feel this gentle or not rollercoaster we call life, to unfold with poignate and uplifting lines, Jessica, so very well done, jmg
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 7/7/2022 6:24:00 AM
Thank you James for leaving a nice comment. I am glad you liked this poem. I hope you are having a great week. Tc Jess :)
Date: 6/16/2014 6:01:00 PM
i love it, i can feel that rush of getting the words out before they leave your head. sloppy but satisfiying, :)
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 6/17/2014 12:55:00 PM
Thank You Casarah, You are always so kind with your comments. I am so glad you liked this piece. Take care my friend, Jess :)
Date: 5/19/2014 9:52:00 PM
Ooh I love your rhyme scheme and word choice it gives the piece a certain tone of knowing what you're doing. Very great I loved it! I hope to read more from you in the future!
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 6/17/2014 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much Maryellen, I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Take care friend, Jess

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