Notes About The Poem

Memories of a Majestic Tree

Where the tree dips in water, ripples propagate wavy motion,
Meandering with zealous vigor in memories of yesteryears
As eerie pause encounters skeletons of bittersweet emotions.

Emerald green leaves flutter, beset in spring’s windy signals 
Recalling first kiss of a young couple, quivering in tiny ripples;
Again and again they came here, until a day said nevermore.

Its branches sway depth of water reminiscing of a youthful girl
Treasuring her secret wishes--a penny in the wind she whirled.
She now comes with grandkids, to cheer its beauty evermore.

A sigh of distress echoes there, tearing bawl of hearts broken
By shattering glass of wine-bottles in a nasty drunken break-up,
And lonesome man’s solo visits escaping his perturbed world.

Life it has cherished, death it has grieved, as time took its toll,
But seeing happy faces it enters new cycles full of green gusto;
Wider it grows to offer its shade to summers of troubled souls.

Colors it blends in romance of sights invoking vibes of autumn
Shedding its leaves, floating on dreams, in colors of meadows—
A nature’s painting preserved forever, adorning life’s museum.

March 13, 2020
Placed 1st: GIF #1 Your best contest by William Kekaula
HM: Strand choice H contest by Brian Strand
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Crabtree Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:52 AM
This is a wonderful poem, Vijay. The images of your poetry matches perfectly with the picture above. How did you get it to move like that? :)
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 5:20 PM
First off... that photo looks exactly like the Angel Oak tree I once saw in South Carolina (reportedly, the oldest tree in the US). Second ... this is quite the time capsule of images. Through thick and thin, through joy and loss ... the majestic tree has seen it all and offers its shade and comfort indiscriminately. Beautiful. I can see why it placed first.
Macfarlane Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 4:48 PM
I love trees and you have given them justice. Lovely images, beautiful write. A well deserved first placed win. Hugs
Neumann Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 5:11 AM
That is so beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai
Michael Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 6:15 AM
Nature can be so lovely...a museum of art that speaks to the soul...You've capture the tree that's in all hearts...Nice one
Pandit Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 8:56 AM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
May Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Memories found in romantic ripples..Well penned Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 3:49 PM
Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:41 AM
Beautiful Vijay. I guess everyone has their special place to come to and remember special times with special people, places and things. I love trees. So beautiful and beneficial to life here on the planet. Great job, love the pic. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Thank you Judy--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Sands Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 9:50 AM
Hi Vijay. I thought I had commented on this beautiful poem. Brilliantly written! I hope you are well. Take care. I hope you have a nice day :)
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Thank you my friend--yes--all is well. Much appreciate.
Kannan Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:29 AM
Such a GREAT poetry with beautiful imageries. Congrats on your well deserved win... You are so talented...
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.
There Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:50 AM
That is an old tree, my friend. A monument, of sorts, that you have served well with your dedication (of sorts ;). To think how many years, how many joys and tears found in its memories. I love the way you have celebrated its majesty. You both deserve a hug. Kudos, Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:04 AM
Happy to read your comments my friend--so glad you stopped by. Much appreciate your kind remarks, HT--many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Your poems are simply the best, nicely written and well delivered Vij, Hope your keeping well xo
Pandit Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Gentile Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Vijay, This beautiful portrait of the cycle of life is a joy to read. Very lovely! Stay healthy and well !!
Pandit Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate.
One Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Wow Vijay I can see why this finished first... The vocabulary to create vivid imager is just fantastic... One of your best writes..
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 3:46 PM
Thank you SO--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Proxenos Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 1:13 PM
WOW Vijay - congratulations on your wonderful win. I don't know how you come up with this outstanding imagery, but you always do - pure talent my friend - blessings, be well and safe Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.
Delaney Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Trees are symbolic of beauty, resilience and existence. You have captured all that brilliantly. Love it congrats on your well deserved wins. SuZ
Pandit Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Thank you SuZ--much appreciate the kind remarks.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 5:04 PM
Trees bear witness to so much and they store the weather in their rings. If they could speak they would share stories of so many things. I loved this wonderful poem Vijay and it is so deserving of your awards. xxoo
Pandit Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 6:17 AM
Much appreciate Connie--many thanks for the kind remarks.
Adams Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 2:59 PM
wow... you brought this tree to life beautifully...such an amazing write and worthy of a win... congratulations! hugs
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Thank you Sandy--much appreciate my friend.
Canerdy Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 9:50 AM
Words seem inadequate to express how deeply this poem moves me! CONGRATS, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 11:51 AM
Much appreciate Janice your kind remarks--many thanks.
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 1:25 AM
Back with big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate.
Kiser Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Beautiful tranquil and thought-provoking. Well done.
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Much appreciate--many thanks, MLK.
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 11:27 AM
This poem is full of memories and emotions, Vijay, some happy, some sad. If trees could only talk!! ~ Congratulations on placing first. // paul
Pandit Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 2:28 PM
So true. Much appreciate Paul--many thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 11:07 AM
What a great write and picture. Loved it. Have a great day writing away...........
Pandit Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 2:09 PM
Trees give us so much!! This is lovely. I am sure you must have won in the contest, but I am not going through the list right now. I hope you placed high with this!
Pandit Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Congrats to you Andrea--you won the top #1 spot. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.
Somadas Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 11:56 PM
The gif image and the poem complementing each other.. Wonderful imagination, masterfully crafted in this form... Great entry Vijay.. Good luck..
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 10:26 PM
Life, moments, memories, love and even death - caress around your words. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. You have a way of touching the heart, with your thoughts. A winner to me. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 7:31 AM
Happy to read your feedback, as always--much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.
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