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Memories Lost

Memories Lost past entangled snares heavy laden under mire lurk memories lost deeply seeded held cleverly hidden in mist are memories lost heaving hoeing ebbing flowing never showing all memories lost ~deborah burch© 4/28/2012

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/5/2012 4:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in PD`s contest...Great piece.......XOX...

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/5/2012 11:51:00 AM

Great write Deborah...congrats!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Deborah. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 6/4/2012 2:40:00 AM

Cap'n Deb congrats on your win, love it..David

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/4/2012 12:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 6/4/2012 12:26:00 AM

thank you soooo much deat Elliott!! i still cannot comment on blogs but i'm reading them...just listened tothe teamsters' anthem on youtube...you are very gifted (as is sweet Vie)..and i listened to your dream as well!!:-) AWSOMENESS!!! Well Done!! love ya, deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2012 6:38:00 PM

Yes, I checked below and I just knew I had seen this before. Congrats to you in the contest. I love nostalgic writes.

Deborah Burch
Date: 6/4/2012 12:28:00 AM

thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 6:18:00 PM

DEB, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD

Deborah Burch
Date: 6/4/2012 12:28:00 AM

thank you PD

David Williams

Date: 5/1/2012 8:39:00 AM

ahoy Captain, we are ebbing and flowing here very nicely, not into the heaving though he he he...David

Deborah Burch
Date: 6/4/2012 12:29:00 AM

lol...thank you David, love ya, cap'n deb

Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/30/2012 9:15:00 PM

All very true Great write. Huggs TLee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2012 5:50:00 PM

hi, Deb. I enjoyed the message here. especially like the ebbing flowing never showing part.

Kash Poet

Date: 4/30/2012 10:49:00 AM

Very nice Deb,Enjoyed.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/30/2012 8:25:00 AM

i see here a great theme put together by descriptive words and images in a very pleasing way, deborah... touche!..;) huggs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/29/2012 11:32:00 PM

You are becoming the haiku queen here....I wanna read a few more of yours this morning....

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 4/29/2012 7:09:00 PM

T do like the Haiku form very much Deborah and i liked yours today , thank you for sharing , best wishes , Declan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2012 4:15:00 PM

Deborah, you'll never guess now I'm having that error on my page.. i have opened this poem,, over a dozen times... lol..I have your last haiku memorized already.. Don't get me wrong.. having lost memories is a sad thought.. all i can think of are deep thoughts.. nice trio of haikus.. .. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, always~ PD

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/29/2012 2:44:00 PM

This is a outstanding write my friend! I love how you made each memories lost a little different. My favorite line is definitely the line, "ebbing flowing never showing" displaying the absence of memories. I love your poem immensely Debbie! Great Work!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 4/29/2012 2:44:00 PM

I like the flow and clever connections shown in oyur haiku.