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Memories Lost

Memories Lost


past entangled snares
heavy laden under mire
lurk memories lost

deeply seeded held
cleverly hidden in mist
are memories lost

heaving  hoeing
ebbing flowing never showing
all memories lost

~deborah burch©
4/28/2012

introspectionnaturephilosophyhaiku

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Olusegun Arowolo

June 5, 2012 at 4:57 PM

Congratulations on your win in PD`s contest...Great piece.......XOX...

Jonas L. Rozario

June 5, 2012 at 11:51 AM

Great write Deborah...congrats!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 5, 2012 at 6:16 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Deborah. Love, Carol

David Williams

June 4, 2012 at 2:40 AM

Cap'n Deb congrats on your win, love it..David

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

June 4, 2012 at 12:20 AM

Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!

Deborah Burch

June 4, 2012 at 12:26 AM

thank you soooo much deat Elliott!! i still cannot comment on blogs but i'm reading them...just listened tothe teamsters' anthem on youtube...you are very gifted (as is sweet Vie)..and i listened to your dream as well!!:-) AWSOMENESS!!! Well Done!! love ya, deb

Andrea Dietrich

June 3, 2012 at 6:38 PM

Yes, I checked below and I just knew I had seen this before. Congrats to you in the contest. I love nostalgic writes.

Deborah Burch

June 4, 2012 at 12:28 AM

thanks

Poet Destroyer A

June 3, 2012 at 6:18 PM

DEB, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD

Deborah Burch

June 4, 2012 at 12:28 AM

thank you PD

David Williams

May 1, 2012 at 8:39 AM

ahoy Captain, we are ebbing and flowing here very nicely, not into the heaving though he he he...David

Deborah Burch

June 4, 2012 at 12:29 AM

lol...thank you David, love ya, cap'n deb

Terry L. Allen

April 30, 2012 at 9:15 PM

All very true Great write. Huggs TLee

Andrea Dietrich

April 30, 2012 at 5:50 PM

hi, Deb. I enjoyed the message here. especially like the ebbing flowing never showing part.

Kash Poet

April 30, 2012 at 10:49 AM

Very nice Deb,Enjoyed.

Nette Onclaud

April 30, 2012 at 8:25 AM

i see here a great theme put together by descriptive words and images in a very pleasing way, deborah... touche!..;) huggs

Gwendolen Song

April 29, 2012 at 11:32 PM

You are becoming the haiku queen here....I wanna read a few more of yours this morning....

Deck Fitzgerald

April 29, 2012 at 7:09 PM

T do like the Haiku form very much Deborah and i liked yours today , thank you for sharing , best wishes , Declan xx

Poet Destroyer A

April 29, 2012 at 4:15 PM

Deborah, you'll never guess now I'm having that error on my page.. i have opened this poem,, over a dozen times... lol..I have your last haiku memorized already.. Don't get me wrong.. having lost memories is a sad thought.. all i can think of are deep thoughts.. nice trio of haikus.. .. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, always~ PD

Joann Grisetti

April 29, 2012 at 2:44 PM

I like the flow and clever connections shown in oyur haiku.

Russell Sivey

April 29, 2012 at 2:44 PM

This is a outstanding write my friend! I love how you made each memories lost a little different. My favorite line is definitely the line, "ebbing flowing never showing" displaying the absence of memories. I love your poem immensely Debbie! Great Work!!

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