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03/15/25

Memories lost within a frozen mist

 

Contest by Sara Jama

Memories Frozen

          Frozen Memories now lost its value.
          How may I melt it, couldn't find any clue.
          Amused and confused, whether it was true !
       
          That happenstance was not as usual,
          but wonderful feeling , so special.
          Budding youth to unfold pretty petals.
          
            A nascent descent strange realisation 
           beyond reasonable explanation
           igniting my pearly passive passion.

           Pricking piercing penetrating amour
           Dreamy desires soaring high in glamour 
           Emotive urge surging ignoring grammar.
            
             All the memories are frozen in last phase.
             Solely dull inert losing glow and glaze.
             Rigid frigid, no impact now a days.
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March 15, 2025 at 6:40 PM
The poem beautifully captures the bittersweet nature of memories. The longing to relive and recapture the past is perceptible.
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