Memories Beyond the Door

Now it's flooding back to me
(Somebody close that door!)
I'm fading into misery
That I've already gone through before
Why did I fall, why does it hurt
Why am I scared to simply love?
My heart is shattered, my heart- it hurts
Even praying to God above
I can't run from all these memories
(Somebody close that door!)
I'm dying here, please let me out
My pains are on the floor
Nobody really understands 
and I feel that I'm always alone
Won't somebody pick me up softly
and carry me back to my home?
Silence here, it's killing me, 
But no silence in my head anymore
I understand I'm worthless, so please
Somebody close that door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/8/2013 7:19:00 PM
great poem here ;}
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Date: 5/1/2013 8:02:00 PM
Wow, this is really an expressive poem, I feel the loneliness in here but you cannot help it, beautiful dark piece :) thank you for your visit before into my page, it's been a pleasure :) wishing you a wonderful day Juli :D hug, Yanny
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Date: 5/1/2013 1:07:00 PM
Been there, done that. Wonderful poem! Wow!
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Date: 4/30/2013 2:45:00 PM
A very sad poem, made me think and left me feeling.
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Date: 4/29/2013 6:38:00 PM
Wow I could feel the pain of the person in this piece. Everyone goes through a period when they struggle with getting over a hurdle. I think of myself as an emotion junky loving every emotion I feel love, pain, laughter, sadness. I feel blessed to experience them all. To feel.
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Date: 4/29/2013 5:02:00 PM
great expression from the pain of disappointment we want to shut the door. A difficult conflict to repair
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Date: 4/29/2013 3:33:00 PM
and also, I agree with PD here!!
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Date: 4/29/2013 3:32:00 PM
It was really cool how you kept saying, somebody close the door. Gave it the sense of urgency. Nicely done.
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Date: 4/29/2013 10:39:00 AM
Good morning Juli, you are not worthless. this is a very sad poem. No one ever knows the reasons to why we fall. But, i tell you one thing you are never alone. I hope this is only a tough through... and not true emotions... always~ Linda
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Date: 4/29/2013 10:10:00 AM
I am closing that door, Juli, Now you can relax, nice write. Thank you for stopping by!! Jag
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