Juli- Michelle Poet Rhyme

Memories Beyond the Door

Now it's flooding back to me
(Somebody close that door!)
I'm fading into misery
That I've already gone through before
Why did I fall, why does it hurt
Why am I scared to simply love?
My heart is shattered, my heart- it hurts
Even praying to God above
I can't run from all these memories
(Somebody close that door!)
I'm dying here, please let me out
My pains are on the floor
Nobody really understands 
and I feel that I'm always alone
Won't somebody pick me up softly
and carry me back to my home?
Silence here, it's killing me, 
But no silence in my head anymore
I understand I'm worthless, so please
Somebody close that door.

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Debbie Duncan September 8, 2013 at 7:19 PM great poem here ;}

Yanny Widjanarko May 1, 2013 at 8:02 PM Wow, this is really an expressive poem, I feel the loneliness in here but you cannot help it, beautiful dark piece :) thank you for your visit before into my page, it's been a pleasure :) wishing you a wonderful day Juli :D hug, Yanny

Connie Moore May 1, 2013 at 1:07 PM Been there, done that. Wonderful poem! Wow!

Kevin Callaghan April 30, 2013 at 2:45 PM A very sad poem, made me think and left me feeling.

Ale A A April 29, 2013 at 6:38 PM Wow I could feel the pain of the person in this piece. Everyone goes through a period when they struggle with getting over a hurdle. I think of myself as an emotion junky loving every emotion I feel love, pain, laughter, sadness. I feel blessed to experience them all. To feel.

Karen Anglesey April 29, 2013 at 5:02 PM great expression from the pain of disappointment we want to shut the door. A difficult conflict to repair

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2013 at 3:33 PM and also, I agree with PD here!!

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2013 at 3:32 PM It was really cool how you kept saying, somebody close the door. Gave it the sense of urgency. Nicely done.

Poet Destroyer A April 29, 2013 at 10:39 AM Good morning Juli, you are not worthless. this is a very sad poem. No one ever knows the reasons to why we fall. But, i tell you one thing you are never alone. I hope this is only a tough through... and not true emotions... always~ Linda

S.Jagathsimhan Nair April 29, 2013 at 10:10 AM I am closing that door, Juli, Now you can relax, nice write. Thank you for stopping by!! Jag