Memories

I see you in the mirror....  as I look into my eyes
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Gauthier Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 12:31 PM
Wow ~ everyone can relate in one way or another to this. It can't help but feel personal. Well done, Debbie !
Forth-Eglon Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 5:03 PM
Hello Debbie, there are so many words, in just a few words. Very powerful. By the way, my beautiful husband Gordon passed peacefully in my arms in his nursing home, in July 2013. Alzheimer’s won. Take care.
Neumann Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Great reflections, Kai
Vangaveti Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 4:49 AM
Wow! It has so much to say :)
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 5:09 AM
- Beautiful eyes ... looking back :) - Best wishes for a peaceful Christmas and a wonderful New Year Debbie :) - Hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
Ashley Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:01 PM
A profound reflection of thought Debbie. What were you seeing, thinking and feeling when you looked into the mirror..? Was it physical or emotional..? A very intriguing and ingenious write. Enjoyed!
Goudreau Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Beautifully executed. Memories...love the title as well. Powerful monoku! A joy to read you.
Deschler Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:11 PM
Many things change over the years, but never the memories... A beautiful poem, Debbie :)
Dutta Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Nice Monoku.I admire.
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:36 PM
The title so fits the words, loved this!
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 2:56 PM
oh, yes, I can really relate to this one
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:47 PM
I am with Connie. It DOES Have many possibilities For me it is simply you seeing the memories of you!! LOVE it
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 2:33 AM
Wow Debbie...beautiful! Mother or father? This poem has so many possibilities, and all are lovely! I love your Monoku! : )
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