Neil Kruger Poet I do not know?

Memories

I remember the first day my eyes fell on you. 
Saying "your beautiful" -  before a "thank you" and I blushing smile -  you ran off and left me there with nothing else to do.

I remember the day we sat in a tree.
It was the first day we fell inlove, you and me.
We sat there for hours talking about life and its dramas, not knowing the things that's going to harm us.
 
I remember the night when our first kiss left me weak in the knees. 
But with a touch of your hand
you left me there stranded, 
not knowing how to handle it
you gave a sweet little giggle 
and blew out the candle light.

These memories haunt me every night of every day.  

I keep phoning, but you will not answer.
Everything you did to me, doesn't matter.
Only thing I want to have is you with me.
My heart is aching, can't you see?

Everytime I close my eyes, 
Everytime I fall asleep,
Everytime I dream of you
I miss you Rosalind

Everytime I hear your name
Everytime I see your face
Everytime I think of you
I realize that I don't want to live without you.

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Vincent Flannery October 17, 2015 at 1:53 PM Love is so powerful. Wonderful, touching piece Neil. Have a great weekend! Neil Kruger November 12, 2015 at 1:34 PM Thank you for your positive feedback Vincent. I'm surprised by all the positive responses this poem has received as I really didn't put much effort into it.

Kp Nunez October 15, 2015 at 10:25 PM As a free verse on the subject, and I guess you're still young, I think you did just fine. I see it as a heartfelt write. When it's from the heart, everything just flows. Thanks for the visit to my poem. A belated welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope to read more from you in the coming days. Kim Neil Kruger November 12, 2015 at 1:37 PM Thank you very much Kim. I'm really taken aback by the comments I've received on this poem. You guys are great

Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2015 at 1:34 PM - A heart that cries ..... beautifully written, Neil ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Neil Kruger November 12, 2015 at 1:42 PM Hallo young lady. Thank you so much for your comment. At least the old ticker is getting better.

Skat A October 13, 2015 at 2:25 PM Hi, Neil, I read your comment at the bottom, you should not be hard on yourself. It's not the best only if you think it is not. However, in my book I think you did a great job, sharing a heartfelt poem for your hearts love Rosalind. I feel this pain is real, thank you for sharing. SKAT Neil Kruger November 12, 2015 at 1:46 PM Hallo SKAT. Seems like you always know what to say. I always enjoy and respect your opinions of my writings. Great to hear from you.

Louise Hernan October 12, 2015 at 11:33 AM Not your best? Can't wait to see what is - this poem is so wonderfully passionate!! I have a poem blog and one of the pages is Guest Poem and every day I find and put another poem on that page with the author's name and a link to where it can be found. If this poem is any indication of your writings, I would love to include yours now and then as Guest Poems on my blog, PoemsToShareFeelings dot com Louise Hernan November 17, 2015 at 3:35 PM I don't know why my name isn't showing here - I have a login name. Maybe I hadn't joined yet. anyway, it's Louise. :) Skat A October 13, 2015 at 2:27 PM no name on a comment, indicates that the poet removed his/her account from this site. :) Neil Kruger October 12, 2015 at 11:45 AM You honestly think so? I think there's poems of mine on here that is much better. But thank you. It actually means a lot.

Neil Kruger October 11, 2015 at 3:22 PM Not the best I've written, but who gives a damn.