Paul Schneiter Poet Rhyme

Memories

They are in the woodwork of my mind 
framed memories fixed, nailed in time.
My father is there, silent as wood.
I sought to know him, but never could.
Mother’s presence splinters the air
I hear her still, voice cobbled in care.
Older sisters emerge, a polished veneer
whispering what others won’t go near.
An older oak-stout brother appears
he ingrained  me with nightmarish fears.
Best memories end a blossomed tree
when a surprise baby brother comes to be.

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Brandy Nicole February 22, 2022 at 6:51 PM I'm in complete awe, with how you describe members of your family. This thought is beautiful. "Best memories end a blossomed tree." Of course, not all memories are wonderful, but they are a part of you. Your words caress softly around my heart. I am so thankful that you are here, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. Hugs and love, Brandy Paul Schneiter February 23, 2022 at 5:27 AM Oh, Brandy, thank you. Please know how much words from you mean to me. You have always been my hero. I shudder to think of a life without you. . .without your sweet, guiding influence and incredible talent. Hugs & Love, Paul

Barbara Peckham August 16, 2021 at 7:04 PM How delightful! Memories true and cherished. I have so many. This is a lovely, heartfelt poem. Paul Schneiter August 21, 2021 at 5:59 PM Thank you, Barbara. It's kind and thoughtful of you to comment. As the curtain begins to close on mortality, memories are virtually all we have left. Hugs, Paul

Gershon Wolf July 6, 2021 at 8:41 PM Love the sustained metaphor here, Paul. May the family tree's branches continue to flourish, nourished by deep roots! Wonderful write! Peace and Tranquility Paul Schneiter July 11, 2021 at 9:07 PM I'm grateful. Gershon, for your kind and on-the-mark comment. You excel at, among other things, message analysis. Paul

Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2021 at 7:59 PM A range of familial emotions here. Congratulations on POTD! Paul Schneiter June 17, 2021 at 3:49 PM Thank you, Kim. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and and kindness in commenting. Hugs, Paul

Regina Mcintosh May 27, 2021 at 7:37 PM Love this!! Awesome thoughts! God bless you. With love, Gina Paul Schneiter June 5, 2021 at 7:12 PM Gina, you are so very kind. Please know of my gratitude. Hugs and love, Paul

Lindsay Laurie May 12, 2021 at 5:25 PM Hello Paul ... a beaut rhythm in your poem and yes, as we grow older memories still remain - thanks again Paul - Lindsay Paul Schneiter May 13, 2021 at 6:48 AM Thank you, Lindsay, my dear, ever-supportive friend. We don't like to think about it, but into each life comes a day when memories are all a person has. We should so live that we have an inventory of positive memories. Hugs, Paul