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Written on May 7th, 2025 for Oliver's Mckeithan Memorial Day Poetry Contest. As an American Memorial Day was big in our family as my great grandfather served and fought in WW2. I'm now an expat but it's still an important holiday for me.

memorial day

blitzed blackened skies 
hail of bullets ricochet ~
crimson fills trenches 

screams of the fallen
reverberate through scorched earth ~  
laid waste to ruin 

dog tags dot stained sand 
identities reduced to ~
scraps of twisted tin

empty caskets draped
in red, white, and blue blankets ~
return to home shores

heroes are buried
a day for remembrance born ~
respect for the slain
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Mckeithan Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 6:50 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Sara. I like your use of Haiku in your poem. Glad Memorial Day is still a part of your celebration.
Jama Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Thank you for placing me in your contest.
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