Memorable Walk In the Mountains

When I think about those mountains
I see you
hiking with passion 
Holding my hand
Ready to fall in my arms when you stumble 
I see us alone in the world 
Touching the clouds together 
Holding each other 
Trusting each other 


The wind blowing by
Making me feel your heart beat
As our minds sink
For each other
Though the thought of letting you go
Sinks in
At the center of this aromatic feeling
I feel like running away
Because I am cut deep by another  man’s angel
But I can't control the feeling within
That wants me to hold on still
So I reach out and K………

This is because 
I have no clue
On how I should let you go

What is it that you do?
That's making me love you so…

Maybe loving you is a mistake
Maybe it’s not
Maybe I can just dream for a while…
So I decide to carry you on my back
Down the mountains
Just after the sunset

Then I start to wonder 
Whether you feel the same
Whether you think of me
Whether you silently call my name
Whether you see what I see
Then I look at your smile 
That smile turns on my world
I hold you to myself and slope down In silence

With many question at this heart of mine
Does she care?
Does she even know?
Will she always be there?
Will she let me go?
Can she love me back?
If tell her my past story
Would she take all the pain away?
If for any reason she never loves me
Would I still want her to stay?
But I remember 
you glow like the light of the harvest moon
soft golden rays to fill my starry heart

My love for you is way too strong
For me to simply forget
Especially with this memorable walk on the mountain 
Your  love is the one thing I shan't regret.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 5:26 PM
It's Free Verse my friend and very enjoyable fav lines [you glow like the light of the harvest moon soft golden rays to fill my starry heart] You can always use the term Verse it can never be wrong ;) Light & Love
Roger  Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 12:27 AM
Thanks Debbie for such inspiring words...I am glad that you loved this one
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Love can be so bittersweet. You convey this beautifully as this poem reveals your romantic soul. A very lovely poem!
Roger  Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 12:29 AM
Thanks Connie for such a better assessment to this poem, I love your work too
Poshiwa Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 6:54 AM
You write with so much passion Rodger, I love how you write.....sad too, don't we all go through a phase like that....xx
Roger  Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 12:36 AM
Thanks herzel indeed we all go through this, at one point we all pupate
Dylan Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 12:43 PM
AHHHHH what beauty you write... what a glorious love but sad too.. I hope she stays for you... your love sounds wonderful... you write awesome.. I can feel your love in each word.. hugs to you Brooke
Roger  Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 12:38 AM
I feel you here Brooke, thanks for being the first to line out sweet words that shine light for me to do even better..hugs indeed
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