Memento On The Moon

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04/ 23/25

Memento On Moon

Tenth Place

Contest by Suzette Richards.

Phases of Moon on inscription round the Earth on revolution will be marvelous memento . Just a simple manifesto. Moon is our nearest neighbour. Closest companion of ours. It awakes inquisitiveness about Universal vastness. extending curiosity to seek human identity . Search for Cosmic explantion since start of civilization. Attraction of Moon from the Earth continues from humans' birth. Event of human Moon landing ! The Great Grand Success : Outstanding. Memento to leave, we deserve - ' Phases of Moon' - as Earth observes.

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Suzette Richards

Date: 4/23/2025 4:14:00 AM

An interesting perspective as one could not see the phases of the moon when on the moon (as witnessed from Earth). 'Search for Cosmic expansion' (not ‘explantion’?) underlines our desire to understand and inquire – sometimes at a price – a circumlocution of enquiry. Thank you for your support, Anisha