Hija De La Luna Poet Verse

Memento of Waters

From the depths I cry with passion,
Springs of water gush forth
Unleashed;
I run over stones sans caution
Trails subtly across earth
A feast!

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Hija de la Luna
nette onclaud's "Memento of Waters" contest
3.9.15

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Kp Nunez April 23, 2015 at 5:06 AM My dear crazy beautiful friend, I hope to see your poems again in the coming days. Please come back! Missing you, your crzy lovely friend. :D Hija De La Luna May 22, 2015 at 9:46 AM My dear crazy lovely Kim, I missed this message. I have been caught in my crazy beautiful world outside poetry soup. I will definitely be back. Looking forward to read your words ??

Scott Thirtyseven April 1, 2015 at 11:56 AM Packed with the visuals. Best of luck in the comp.

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2015 at 6:19 PM very nicely done, dear! Hija De La Luna March 12, 2015 at 5:37 AM Thanks, Andrea!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 10, 2015 at 2:57 AM Lovely! Big Smiles, This contest is a beautiful challenge. Good luck.

Jan Allison March 9, 2015 at 11:04 AM so beautifully penned Hija lovely imagery - good luck in the contest:-) I love these short forms so few words can say so much:-) 7 xx Hija De La Luna March 9, 2015 at 11:42 PM thanks, Jan, for the wonderful comment! hugs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 8, 2015 at 11:26 PM Beautiful imagery with the elements of earth, water, and passion for life...well done and best wishes, Hija...hugs, Rhonda Hija De La Luna March 9, 2015 at 11:44 PM thanks, Rhonda! appreciate your comment! hugs back!

Arthur Vaso March 8, 2015 at 10:40 PM Simply beautiful!!!! Hija De La Luna March 8, 2015 at 11:00 PM thank you for finding this beautiful! Always a pleasure to read ur comments!

Njeri Hunjeri March 8, 2015 at 10:29 PM Nicely written. I enjoyed. All the best in the contest Hija De La Luna March 8, 2015 at 11:01 PM glad u enjoyed this njeri! Thanks for the lovely words and visit!

Kp Nunez March 8, 2015 at 9:57 PM My crazy beautiful friend, this one is for the win! All the elements required are there. I just crazy love this! A 7 and to the favs! :) Kim Hija De La Luna March 8, 2015 at 10:10 PM haha no prob! Your comments are a delight no matter what :))) Hija De La Luna March 8, 2015 at 10:02 PM haha I was writing this on Kimberly's comment box but something happened! Hija De La Luna March 8, 2015 at 9:59 PM thank, dear crazy lovely Kim! I crazy love your comments hehe as always! Cheers! Love an light to you! Hija De La Luna March 8, 2015 at 9:57 PM oh, Kimberly, thanks for such a sweet comment! It is an inspiration! Hugs, hugs!

Kim Shaw March 8, 2015 at 9:54 PM Wow, so beautiful. I am really enjoying this contest. The visuals are so inspiring! Good luck with this winner, Hija hugs, Kimberly xx Hija De La Luna March 8, 2015 at 10:01 PM Oh, Kimberly, thanks for such a sweet comment! It is an inspiration! Hugs, hugs!