Memento of Waters

From the depths I cry with passion,
Springs of water gush forth
Unleashed;
I run over stones sans caution
Trails subtly across earth
A feast!

visual #5

Hija de la Luna
nette onclaud's "Memento of Waters" contest
3.9.15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/23/2015 5:06:00 AM
My dear crazy beautiful friend, I hope to see your poems again in the coming days. Please come back! Missing you, your crzy lovely friend. :D
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Date: 5/22/2015 9:46:00 AM
My dear crazy lovely Kim, I missed this message. I have been caught in my crazy beautiful world outside poetry soup. I will definitely be back. Looking forward to read your words ??
Date: 4/1/2015 11:56:00 AM
Packed with the visuals. Best of luck in the comp.
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Date: 3/10/2015 6:19:00 PM
very nicely done, dear!
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Date: 3/12/2015 5:37:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 3/10/2015 2:57:00 AM
Lovely! Big Smiles, This contest is a beautiful challenge. Good luck.
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:04:00 AM
so beautifully penned Hija lovely imagery - good luck in the contest:-) I love these short forms so few words can say so much:-) 7 xx
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/9/2015 11:42:00 PM
thanks, Jan, for the wonderful comment! hugs!
Date: 3/8/2015 11:26:00 PM
Beautiful imagery with the elements of earth, water, and passion for life...well done and best wishes, Hija...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:44:00 PM
thanks, Rhonda! appreciate your comment! hugs back!
Date: 3/8/2015 10:40:00 PM
Simply beautiful!!!!
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/8/2015 11:00:00 PM
thank you for finding this beautiful! Always a pleasure to read ur comments!
Date: 3/8/2015 10:29:00 PM
Nicely written. I enjoyed. All the best in the contest
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Date: 3/8/2015 11:01:00 PM
glad u enjoyed this njeri! Thanks for the lovely words and visit!
Date: 3/8/2015 9:57:00 PM
My crazy beautiful friend, this one is for the win! All the elements required are there. I just crazy love this! A 7 and to the favs! :) Kim
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/8/2015 10:10:00 PM
haha no prob! Your comments are a delight no matter what :)))
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/8/2015 10:02:00 PM
haha I was writing this on Kimberly's comment box but something happened!
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/8/2015 9:59:00 PM
thank, dear crazy lovely Kim! I crazy love your comments hehe as always! Cheers! Love an light to you!
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/8/2015 9:57:00 PM
oh, Kimberly, thanks for such a sweet comment! It is an inspiration! Hugs, hugs!
Date: 3/8/2015 9:54:00 PM
Wow, so beautiful. I am really enjoying this contest. The visuals are so inspiring! Good luck with this winner, Hija hugs, Kimberly xx
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Date: 3/8/2015 10:01:00 PM
Oh, Kimberly, thanks for such a sweet comment! It is an inspiration! Hugs, hugs!
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