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Memento of Waters

Reflections on black water lay below dark rounded sky until The day reveals a color gray as night begins to cry so still visual 1 contest Memento of Waters Frederic Parker 3/8/15

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2015 2:18:00 PM

Dark yet beautiful flowing lines, Frederic...best wishes and hugs, Rhonda

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/10/2015 12:06:00 PM

Nice take on the topic... best wishes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2015 3:46:00 PM

Nicely done. I shall have to take a look at visual one again to see that one. Do we have to call it memento of waters? I have a different title for when I post mine.

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/8/2015 6:16:00 PM

No, it was just me being lazy, and the title fit..I replaced those trees with crape myrtle trees of red,purple , pink and white when they all bloom my yard burts with color

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2015 3:46:00 PM

oh, and sorry about your trees.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2015 11:40:00 AM

Beautifully descriptive Frederic - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx