Frederic Parker Poet Verse

Memento of Waters

Reflections on black water lay
below dark rounded sky
until
The day reveals a color gray
as night begins to cry
so still

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contest Memento of Waters
Frederic Parker
3/8/15

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 10, 2015 at 2:18 PM Dark yet beautiful flowing lines, Frederic...best wishes and hugs, Rhonda

Poesy Relish March 10, 2015 at 12:06 PM Nice take on the topic... best wishes

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2015 at 3:46 PM oh, and sorry about your trees.

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2015 at 3:46 PM Nicely done. I shall have to take a look at visual one again to see that one. Do we have to call it memento of waters? I have a different title for when I post mine. Frederic Parker March 8, 2015 at 6:16 PM No, it was just me being lazy, and the title fit..I replaced those trees with crape myrtle trees of red,purple , pink and white when they all bloom my yard burts with color

Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 11:40 AM Beautifully descriptive Frederic - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx