Melting Thoughts Premiere Contest Winner

The snowflakes, white and pure, they ballet in
       Like newborn thoughts that surface from within,
we would be wise to treat them tenderly -
         just one harsh influence, they cease to be.

And we know not what will become of them.
          They wander, yet inside their havens stay
Some find their way and rest upon firm ground,
            misled, a few by winds are blown away.

The boots of fate come trampling in on that
         which envy, fear and hate already taint.
They fragment those whose flawless structured mat
        has glazed itself in nature’s silver paint.

Exagoni, pristine, stay free of fear
   though their impending fate remains unclear.
Likewise true thoughts prevail, preserved inside,
    though they may be witness to Evil’s tide.


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/23/2018 7:11:00 PM
Oh, Sneha, I am so happy to be back again to congratulate you on another fine podium win for your beautifully written poem! Well done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/21/2018 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful. Well done! :)
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Date: 7/20/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyable -a special write- love always
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Date: 7/20/2018 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write, Sneha - I remember this cuz it won before on my birthday, (and it is such an impactful poem) - blessings and best wishes, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 7/20/2018 6:24:00 PM
Wonderful win, dear. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/20/2018 11:02:00 AM
Bravo, Subimal. Awesome poem. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:58:00 AM
What a beauty this is, Sneha! I'm glad to scroll back and find this one, and it proves it has won this contest with very good reason! A lovely poem it is!
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Date: 1/20/2018 2:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Sneha - very well done, my friend ... blessings to you! :-)
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Date: 1/18/2018 9:03:00 AM
Such a lovely wintery poem, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/16/2018 11:02:00 PM
You remind me why I love snow. Your poem captures its beauty wonderfully.
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Date: 1/16/2018 7:21:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Sneha. Congrats to you on your win.
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Date: 1/16/2018 7:09:00 AM
awesome! congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 12/27/2017 9:48:00 AM
Beautifully expressed, it brings to mind scripture.
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Date: 11/22/2017 8:00:00 PM
Sneha, such a beautifully expressed and scintillating poem. Fantastic imagery with lovely rhyme. Excellent and enjoyed with a belated congrats on your top win with this splendid poem!
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:52:00 PM
What a wonderful poem...super 7
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Date: 7/8/2016 8:09:00 AM
Congrats Sneha, for your placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/18/2016 2:31:00 PM
Sneha, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/30/2016 1:11:00 PM
Also I see it got a trophy next to it. What a great winning poem!
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:08:00 PM
I see this won in a contest. So pleased for you, sweetie. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Andrea!! You helped me learn.. :) :)
Date: 5/9/2016 12:48:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thanks a lot!! :) :)
Date: 5/3/2016 3:20:00 PM
Beautiful poem. You have got two great teachers. i don't know this form. In time i will learn from them also. Congrats on your win. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:21:00 PM
Thank you so much!! They're very helpful.. :) :)
Date: 5/2/2016 1:32:00 AM
Lovely poem...congratulations on your placement
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Date: 5/2/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thanks a lot!! :) :)
Date: 5/1/2016 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations Sneha, what a beautiful piece!
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Date: 5/1/2016 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much!! :) :)
Date: 5/1/2016 10:39:00 AM
Each snowflake is unique and exquisitely beautiful, as is your poem !! Congrats to you, Sneha !!
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Date: 5/1/2016 12:44:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment, dear Carrie!! So glad you like it!! :) :)
Date: 5/1/2016 8:30:00 AM
My heartfelt congratulations to you, Sneha, for your top of the podium, well-deserved win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/1/2016 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so so much for your lovely comments and support, dear Sandra!! Your help was so useful.. :) :)
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