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Melting Snow

welcome sun today
melting snow creates a mess
slush, without flavor

written January 25, 2022

snowwinterhaiku

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Caren Krutsinger

January 28, 2022 at 11:10 AM

I add flavor - a bit of Koolaid or juice to that white white snow! That gray stuff disgusts me.

L Milton Hankins

January 28, 2022 at 11:29 AM

Oh, man, you mean you make snow cones, too??? I love them. It's one of the true pleasures of a winter snow, prepared while the snow is fresh, fluffy, and clean!