Melting Snow

welcome sun today melting snow creates a mess slush, without flavor written January 25, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/28/2022 11:10:00 AM

I add flavor - a bit of Koolaid or juice to that white white snow! That gray stuff disgusts me.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/28/2022 11:29:00 AM

Oh, man, you mean you make snow cones, too??? I love them. It's one of the true pleasures of a winter snow, prepared while the snow is fresh, fluffy, and clean!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2022 3:38:00 AM

How quickly the sun can turn pristine snow to gray slush. A great haiku Milton. Blessings xxoo

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/26/2022 11:36:00 AM

Thanks, Connie. Yes, that's when it's most disgusting. I don't mind a pretty white new snow so much, but the aftermath is awful.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/26/2022 1:12:00 AM

I love the fresh snow in all its glory then the thaw comes and you're right, it looks a right mess. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/26/2022 11:37:00 AM

Couldn't agree more, Tom. Thanks for your thoughts.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2022 7:56:00 PM

this is really cool. Makes me think of a tasteless slushy. yuk, january!!!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/26/2022 11:38:00 AM

And so it is in my neck of the woods, Andrea.