Melting Flames

Sunsets on a lake
Like fire melting on water
With a calm blue glow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Another good one, Larry. Great write. Ralph
Conway Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Intriguing Imagery!~Tirzah~
Spence Sr Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 10:29 AM
The images in this haiku are just awesome. I can see them clearly like sitting there in the midst of the reflection. Great job! Joseph
Devonshire Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Amazing analogy -- "like fire melting on water." Terrific haiku that paints a vivid image. Love, Carolyn
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