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Melting Flames

Sunsets on a lake Like fire melting on water With a calm blue glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/27/2010 10:09:00 AM
Another good one, Larry. Great write. Ralph
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Date: 6/26/2010 10:45:00 AM
Intriguing Imagery!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/26/2010 10:29:00 AM
The images in this haiku are just awesome. I can see them clearly like sitting there in the midst of the reflection. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/26/2010 9:58:00 AM
Amazing analogy -- "like fire melting on water." Terrific haiku that paints a vivid image. Love, Carolyn
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