Melting Clocks (2009)

A sliding of time, one fatal move
And you've become the reflection.
Walking ever so uncomfortably,
In the other mans shoes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 13, 2009 at 2:30 AM
Nice work, reminds me of Salvador Dali...Raul
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June 13, 2009 at 12:26 AM
Lovely enigma here Naomi.Rgds Brian
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June 10, 2009 at 2:40 PM
In the other mans shoe-Clever ending:Good work:)
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