Meltdown

MELTDOWN you triggered a meltdown in a public place what a disgrace I came undone while you had fun so I went away to that space that I hate where nothing matters and everyone speaks “numb” © Kim van Breda—3 October 2015
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Linney Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 3:09 PM
I like this , it says so much to me
Van Breda Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Gary.. true story. So pleased that it strikes a note. ~~X~~
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