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Melt In Your Mouth

Eagerly I open the square round package. My senses go crazy as the sweetness fills my nose. I take a bite and its like heaven savoring every bite hoping to last forever. Bite after bite tastes better than the first. One more bite and my tasty treat is gone. I'm thinking about putting it in my pocket and saving it for later. The temptation is unbearable........my love is gone. No more crunch, sweetness, or stickiness. I'm gonna cry so I guess I have to go to the store and buy a life supply. It melts in your mouth and not in your hands, R.I.P. Rice Krispy Treat.....LOL!

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