Melt Down

Unlit votive candle melts smoldering heart.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

December 27, 2009 at 4:26 AM

Deb, Very good, again! It reminds me of the time I told a friend of mine that we don't get hot in the summer when we don't use the AC. I didn't use the central air, just room AC. She said, "Yeah, right. Look at your candles. There in the sconces, previously unnoticed, were many candles gracefully bowing almost to their "feet" LOL... Well, when it got hot, we went on outings. Our hearts didn't smelter, though. Distracted again, but enjoyed your write. Love you. "The Pink Flamingo" LOL