Melt

Eyes Saw Mouth Opened Hands Reached Skin Touched Vibes Felt Heart Melt

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John Rhinem

Date: 8/4/2010 11:08:00 PM

Smile ~ Sounds as though a moment amid passions born from births fulfilled ~ And "Yes," ones heart can surely feel as though it were melting, upon perhaps the dawning of anothers day when, love one would hope, finally found its way; this, surely a gift, as great as any gifts a life shall ever know ~ "Very Passionate & Well Expressed" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always," John!:) ~ Smile, time for one more dear lady....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 7:01:00 PM

great way to do all one words down!! HI, there, Jessica. Just trying to catch up tonight here! LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/4/2010 1:10:00 AM

Lips smiled. ^_^ very nice list in one word lines, too-- short but sweet-- nikko :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/3/2010 4:08:00 AM

enjoyed reading your list today...nice!