Melt

Eyes
Saw
Mouth
Opened
Hands
Reached
Skin
Touched
Vibes
Felt
Heart
Melt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rhinem Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 11:08 PM
Smile ~ Sounds as though a moment amid passions born from births fulfilled ~ And "Yes," ones heart can surely feel as though it were melting, upon perhaps the dawning of anothers day when, love one would hope, finally found its way; this, surely a gift, as great as any gifts a life shall ever know ~ "Very Passionate & Well Expressed" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always," John!:) ~ Smile, time for one more dear lady....
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 7:01 PM
great way to do all one words down!! HI, there, Jessica. Just trying to catch up tonight here! LUv, Andrea
K. Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:10 AM
Lips smiled. ^_^ very nice list in one word lines, too-- short but sweet-- nikko :)
Culverhouse Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 4:08 AM
enjoyed reading your list today...nice!
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