Jenish Somadas Poet Verse

Melody In Dust

strands of love
sung in fine flair tune
near her side.

strain ends, then
life took my dear keys
now with dust.


Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S CHOICE B,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Shirley Hawkins May 15, 2020 at 2:30 AM Jenish, your pen has flowed over with this Poem. The picture paints a thousand words all expressed beautifully in your Muse... Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 3:39 AM Very happy to know, you liked it..When we reach the coda of our songs, like to sing the intro once more.Takecare always..

Gershon Wolf May 14, 2020 at 2:36 PM So nicely sentimental. Really soulful, my friend. Cheers, Gershon Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 3:33 AM Thank you for you kind support dear Gershon..Takecare..

Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2020 at 5:23 PM oh it ends on a melancholy note! Well done, poet. Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 12:06 AM Thank you Andrea..

Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2020 at 2:43 PM - Beautiful memories that turned into dust, Jenish - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 12:06 AM If we are live, many will sing with us..but if broken, with dust we rest..Thank you Ann for your delightful comment..

Tom Cunningham May 12, 2020 at 7:56 AM Love your interpretation of the picture Jenish. Good luck Tom Jenish Somadas May 12, 2020 at 8:40 AM Thank you Tom for your support..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 12, 2020 at 7:54 AM Profound in its silencing. Gorgeous write. xomo Jenish Somadas May 12, 2020 at 8:39 AM Thank you Maureen..

Vijay Pandit May 12, 2020 at 7:22 AM Succinctly depicted, deeply meaningful..well done, Jenish. All the best. Jenish Somadas May 12, 2020 at 8:39 AM Thank you Vijay for your kind support..