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Melody In Dust

strands of love sung in fine flair tune near her side. strain ends, then life took my dear keys now with dust. Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S CHOICE B,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/15/2020 2:30:00 AM

Jenish, your pen has flowed over with this Poem. The picture paints a thousand words all expressed beautifully in your Muse...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 3:39:00 AM

Very happy to know, you liked it..When we reach the coda of our songs, like to sing the intro once more.Takecare always..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/14/2020 2:36:00 PM

So nicely sentimental. Really soulful, my friend. Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 3:33:00 AM

Thank you for you kind support dear Gershon..Takecare..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2020 5:23:00 PM

oh it ends on a melancholy note! Well done, poet.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 12:06:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2020 2:43:00 PM

- Beautiful memories that turned into dust, Jenish - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 12:06:00 AM

If we are live, many will sing with us..but if broken, with dust we rest..Thank you Ann for your delightful comment..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/12/2020 7:56:00 AM

Love your interpretation of the picture Jenish. Good luck Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/12/2020 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Tom for your support..

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/12/2020 7:54:00 AM

Profound in its silencing. Gorgeous write. xomo

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/12/2020 8:39:00 AM

Thank you Maureen..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/12/2020 7:22:00 AM

Succinctly depicted, deeply meaningful..well done, Jenish. All the best.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/12/2020 8:39:00 AM

Thank you Vijay for your kind support..