Melodies On High- Andaree

 
Spring's alluring tune put butterflies in flight and make daffodils dance with delight, A gentle breeze, and leaves sigh Beneath azure sky. From trees on High Birdsongs dawn, As hummingbirds fly Seeking sweet nectar nearby, With lilacs and hyacinths* in sight, Spring's alluring tune put butterflies in flight
* Hyacinths is 3 syllables on HMS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Canerdy Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 5:08 PM
Lovely, appealing description, Joseph! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Such a sweet tribute to spring. Big congrats on a great win
Allison Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 11:40 AM
what a charming spring time poem , I do find Andrea's andaree form very challenging, this is a joy to read:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Thanks Jan, I agree, it is very challenging
Nicole Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 6:04 PM
I enjoy watching ' hummingbirds fly ' in an ' azure sky. ' Spring is a beautiful season, indeed. I just love the hourglass shape that this form creates. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 6:41 PM
Thank you Brandy, Spring brings smiles to the heart
Greenhough Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Lovely thoughts of spring have me hoping it will soon be here. The hummingbirds are a positive sign.
May Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 6:40 PM
Thanks Hilda
Buhagiar Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:23 AM
You make it sound just a simple poem, but I cannot do it. A treat to the readers who love such poems.
May Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:36 AM
This is not an easy form, I struggled with the middle part, Thank you Victor
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 7:26 AM
A welcome season for sure Joseph, summer won't be far behind. Tom
May Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Summer is right around the corner, Thank you Tom
Sands Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 6:53 AM
A beautiful, enjoyable spring poem Joseph. Very nice :)
May Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:34 AM
Thank you Heidi
Pandit Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 6:07 AM
Alluring tune and alluring imagery, Joseph--much enjoyed the inspiration of your poem reveling in spring.
May Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:34 AM
Thank you Vijay
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