Melodic Stream

Trickling water streams,
Flowing waves of soothing peace;
Cobblestoned bottom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:14 PM
Peaceful haiku, love the essence it evokes.
Chamma Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 1:23 AM
A wonderful Haiku..Imagery, sensation... Always, The young one, Farah
Kroeger Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 8:32 AM
aww pretty I love it..
Townsend Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 11:10 PM
Such a serene melody is played out here. You have such a gift with this short form. Your words send out beautiful images to the mind so that the reader can truly and fully experience the beauty and tranquility of nature. Amazing writing. Smiles from Lolita
Devonshire Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 8:23 PM
There is a beautiful melody in those "trickling water streams." Great work, Raul!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 3:45 PM
Raul, your poetry is soooo good. I am amazed time after time when I read your work. So much said in so few words. Lovingly. Dane
Shahwan Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Very Beautiful.
Goff Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Raul, this cool haiku is incredible spoken!! I would love to hear you speak your work! Jim ...cobblestoned bottom!!!!
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