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Melodic Stream

Trickling water streams, Flowing waves of soothing peace; Cobblestoned bottom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 10:14:00 PM
Peaceful haiku, love the essence it evokes.
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Date: 4/25/2009 1:23:00 AM
A wonderful Haiku..Imagery, sensation... Always, The young one, Farah
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Date: 4/24/2009 8:32:00 AM
aww pretty I love it..
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Date: 4/23/2009 11:10:00 PM
Such a serene melody is played out here. You have such a gift with this short form. Your words send out beautiful images to the mind so that the reader can truly and fully experience the beauty and tranquility of nature. Amazing writing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/23/2009 8:23:00 PM
There is a beautiful melody in those "trickling water streams." Great work, Raul!
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Date: 4/23/2009 3:45:00 PM
Raul, your poetry is soooo good. I am amazed time after time when I read your work. So much said in so few words. Lovingly. Dane
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Date: 4/23/2009 12:39:00 PM
Very Beautiful.
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Date: 4/23/2009 12:33:00 PM
Raul, this cool haiku is incredible spoken!! I would love to hear you speak your work! Jim ...cobblestoned bottom!!!!
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