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me'lange redbird, bluebird, goldfinch fight.... fall's skimpy birdbath

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/4/2020 7:12:00 PM

Awesome short poem! :) It is full of imagination and intense.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 7:27:00 AM

J.W., Thanks for the nice review of my work ..I appreciate it. Sara

Silent One

Date: 11/24/2020 8:19:00 AM

That looks like a three way battle! Great imagery in your haiku..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 5:22:00 AM

SO, Yes, in the picture it is a battle by three. Only one wins though..At the birdbath that day the red cardinal was the winner. Sara

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/24/2020 2:19:00 AM

written well

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/24/2020 1:50:00 PM

Mahtab, Thanks..SK

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/23/2020 11:19:00 PM

Loved this imagery of fall with all those birds. ~~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/24/2020 7:25:00 AM

Victor, Thanks for the visit to my page. I am glad you enjoyed the imagery. The other day I was feeling down and I looked out the window at the birdbath which needs to be emptied, clean and refilled but there was some water in which a male red cardinal was bathing. A bluebird came and wanted in but the cardinal was fighting him off then two goldfinches were hovering near wanting their turn. Almost as fast as they came they were gone but those few minutes made such a difference in that day and many since. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/23/2020 8:52:00 PM

I love this delightfully cute haiku! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/23/2020 10:55:00 PM

Evelyn, Thanks for your visit. SK

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/23/2020 8:12:00 PM

Very! funny! The struggle for survival! ~ C. Darwin

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/23/2020 10:22:00 PM

Gershon, Yes, we all struggle for survival. Life isn't easy but it is so much easier for us now than it was for our ancestors in so many ways but in some ways it is harder. Thanks for dropping by. Sara