Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Melancoly

melancoly sombre sits,
round my concious half of wit,
but then im not awake, tom tit,(finch)
and cold consumes the night,
i think you got it write,
when im awake a bit,
id now admit,
a poetry delight,


of: ' Alone Again'   Terry O'Leary

Don

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Anthony Nutter September 21, 2012 at 5:32 PM Talented powerful write as always my friend

Poet Destroyer A September 16, 2012 at 12:23 AM Hi Don, nice poets and words of delight.. a powerful mood... always~ pd

Terry O'Leary September 15, 2012 at 7:49 PM Hmmm Don... it seems that sometimes my 'few words' inspires you to very poetic flights... I'm happy to be of use... I also like your poem (though I hope you're not really (too) melancholy...)... Terry (thanks for your very creative response!)

Russell Sivey September 15, 2012 at 7:12 PM Quite the interesting write my friend, a fascinating piece, very enlightening! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly fine poem this evening! You've done excellently with this write, a well put together poem! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!