Nato Calubiran Poet I do not know?

Melancholy Memory : Forever Alone

Do remember me
Hope tangled on a string
Love isn't a thing
Arrogance

Like a fallen tree
Branches and twigs wither
The whole body suffers
Pestilence

Love is full of lies
Full of hatred and despise
Bringing people demise
Entropy

I keep on waiting
For the tree to bear fruit
For the fruit to ripen
This patience

I love you so much
My reason for breathing
The reason I'm living
Mannequin



This is my entry for the contest
Melancholy Memory

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Orlin Collier May 29, 2013 at 7:59 PM I like your writing style, and thanks for the comment on my poem. whatever happened to the contest Roy did? i entered but its not up there anymore. Anyways this poem is awesome i love it :)

Sasha Maharaj May 22, 2013 at 3:42 AM beautiful. all the best :)

Siza Sibiya May 22, 2013 at 2:28 AM I love you multiple parallels Love to a tree lonelines to a puppet on a string Beautiful Peom indeed! *Standing Ovation* Nato Calubiran May 22, 2013 at 3:02 AM thanks to you appreciating it. It might be really confusing but if you really try to understand the essence of the writing that's when you'll understand what the author felt in writing the poem which is me of course. Thanks for the comment and God Bless!