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Melancholy

Moonless darkness of gloomiest spirits, she sat Engrossed in sorrowful thoughts Like the sun during a storm, she was A dreary persona dead with hopelessness Numbness swept through her veins, and then like a Cloud blanket cracked apart by rays of light Her cornflower eyes glistens in pain Of the numerous things that swayed her life Little by little she learned the way to survive Yet it took away her time

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Date: 9/23/2017 6:59:00 AM
A very cleverly written acrostic that painted a beautiful and vivid picture. Enjoyed reading it.
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Susan Johnson
Date: 9/23/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much. Your comments mean a lot to me.

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