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Why this melancholy that pierces my defences, that holds me That invades this gentle heart, leaving its mark, a lasting legacy? Will I ever fully understand this broken, flawed nature holding me Persuading me, that I need it’s comforting, such a tragic fallacy. Patrick Brennan © 2010

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Date: 1/25/2016 7:30:00 PM
PATRICK, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:22:00 AM
Another day of fasinating reading ahead of me I see. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Patrick. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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